LOST [Fan-Fiction] Season 4, Episode 1: Invisible (Part 3)

Episode 2, Part 1 is up! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cwhxNH8qbkc PART 1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWw1AKWMkv4 PART 2 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sbxd-HUYWmw Jeez, I was really bad at this! Holy crap! And this would be the finishing chapter of Episode 1, "Invisible". I should probably apologize for giving this Episode the same name as the ubiquitous Clay Aiken song, but what can I say? I'm still undecided as to the title of Episode 2, but the opening scene has been playing in my head for days, it's a real doozy. Nothing much to say about this one, aside from the usual "Hey, check out my hack job on these pics!" I'm pretty happy with most of it though. This would have been up at least four hours sooner, but at the last second I came to realize that it didn't make sense for Desmond not to at least ask about the boat. Here he was having just met a girl from the ship who was carrying his picture. He sees Charlie talking to Penny, Charlie relays the message that it's not Penny's boat, so where did the picture come from? Surely Des would be wondering about that, so I had to make sure he talked about it. I'm sure there are still things like that that I have missed. As for John Locke's motivation at this point, your guess is as good as mine. He is the wedge that keeps stalling the story, not all that dissimilarly from how he stalls every flight survivors' escape plan though. Watch out for the one-second frame of Ben towards the end and make sure you're not watching alone in the dark! I also, for some unknown reason, always laugh when I see Desmond's reaction to the sight of the Orchid Station. It's just a really funny frame for some reason. The ending is a little rushed and I think I got the ship backwards when Jack was telling them which side of it he was looking at. See ya at Episode 2 then, brotha!

YouTube | August 25, 2007

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